Friday, February 12, 2010

Wierd stuff I wrote on the road to California.

At me in the eyes and his were squinty and black and he pointed to the half-built bank behind him and said, see that? that’s a whorehouse— you a Christian? – you ever looked the enemy in the eyes?— you ever felt the opposition pressed up right against your face so you can taste it in your mouth? He said, I spoke a prayer before I walked across that street there and a psychopath tried a run me down—you can feel it—when the enemy—ya know?—I spoke a prayer and you see that crosswalk?— car came ‘round that corner and tried a run me down—the enemy tried to run me down ‘cuz I just spoke a prayer. He said, you know what I done in my life?—I shut down thousands a bad banks—I’m a author. He looked at me the way that a bear looks at you when it’s told you its life story and hopes you care. He looked at me and he was a big man we he walked like he was tired all the time. He walked like his back hurts. He looked up across the sidewalk and saw me and smiled at my walking to him. He looked

2 comments:

Likely said...

I kind of love this and I don't know quite why.

Especially the first piece... I like your tone and your rhythm in the dialogue....

do you write for song inspiration or just to get thought or ideas out of your head? Do you want to write someday?

Jesse Nicholas Quebbeman-Turley said...

Thank you for liking them. I just write because I like to write and because writing feels nice and because yea ideas get stuck up in the attic.

I donno about writing. I often think I might, but right now I am focused on music. I think I'll always write-- I just don't know if I'll ever do anything with writing.